I have most of chapter two finished. Had a great day of inspiration, with my biggest victory coming in the form a a new character. More of the mystery will be revealed, but only a little. I still don't know if the newbie is good or bad, I've not decided. Since I like to write by the seat of my pants I guess I'll find out when I write it. For some reason trying to figure out how to describe the newbie was a problem, I didn't really want a clear look but a open interperation. In the books I read the author can describe the character to the tee but everbody stills sees the person different, for my stories the look is up to me and partly up to the reader I just provide a outline.
I hope the next chapter is good, I've rewritten the beginning two times, this time I hope the beginning works. I still might rewrite some of it. Revise, revise, and more revising! It's the hardest part of the writing process for me since I like to tear the whole thing apart. For the readers sake lets hope not.
If you've read to this part thank you for reading, I know this seems boring. I appreciate those who have read the story so far.